
Sample Essay (800 words) 
For the assignment question and analysis, see Sample essay 1   
Education means considerably more than just teaching a student to read, write, and 
manipulate numbers. Computers, the Internet, and advanced electronic devices are 
becoming essential in everyday life and have changed the way information is gathered. How 
this new technology is utilized in the curriculum and managed by teachers will have an 
important role to play in widening the resource and knowledge base for all students. 
Technology affects the way teachers teach and students learn. To make the best use of 
information technology (IT), schools need a workable plan to fully integrate it into all aspects 
of the curriculum so students are taught how, why, and when to use technology to further 
enhance their learning. 
If a school does not have a clear plan of how and why it wishes to implement IT, then it runs 
the risk of wasting money. In schools today, nearly all classrooms have access to a computer. 
However, many schools mistake this as incorporating information technology into the 
curriculum. School staff need to research what IT is available and what would best serve the 
school's purpose, not simply purchase the latest equipment. There should be a policy stating 
how IT is going to assist pupils' development and what teachers want pupils to achieve 
(Reksten, 2000). Staff members need to be clear about what they want IT to do for them 
before they can start incorporating it into their lessons. 
The only way information technology is going to be useful to schools is if all staff members 
are well-informed and fully supported. It is the principal's responsibility, and should be part 
of the school's plan, to ensure that all staff are consulted about the changes, and that the 
change is carefully organised. Some teachers may be resistant, especially if they have not had 
much experience with computers, so training teachers is essential in implementing IT into the 
school curriculum. Staff members must feel involved in the process of acquiring technology, 
and in learning how to operate it, in order for them to increase their confidence in using IT as 
a curriculum tool. Teachers are only going to be able to incorporate IT into their lessons if 
they are competent users themselves (Reksten, 2000). 
In addition, teachers need to be aware that IT within the classroom is extremely flexible, but 
that they need to plan what purpose IT serves in each lesson. The skills a child learns are the 
Comment [de1]: Structure: Introductions 
The essay begins with a general lead into the broad 
topic by indicating the inadequacy of traditional 
teaching alone. It sets up a problem that the essay 
will solve. See 
essay introduction. 
Format: Spacing 
Essays are usually double-spaced or 1.5-line spaced. 
See 
formatting and layout. 
Comment [de3]: Structure: Introductions 
The topic is narrowed by affirming the significance 
of IT for teachers and students. 
Structure: Introductions 
The final sentence is the thesis statement. Notice 
how the beginning of the sentence is constructed to 
answer the essay question. It uses keywords from 
the question: “best use”, “information technology”, 
and “schools”. See 
essay thesis statement. 
Format: Abbreviations 
“Information technology” is followed by its 
abbreviated form in brackets: “(IT)”. 
Now that it has been defined, the abbreviation can 
be used elsewhere in the essay. 
Comment [de6]: Structure: Body paragraphs 
The first sentence of this paragraph is the topic 
sentence. It signals that the paragraph is about how 
schools need a clear plan for implementing IT. This 
point follows up on the first point made in the thesis 
statement: schools need a workable plan. See 
essay 
body paragraphs. 
Comment [de7]: Structure: Body paragraphs 
This statement moves into specifics; it details 
particular actions that a school can do to develop an 
IT plan. See 
essay body paragraphs. 
Referencing: In-text 
citation 
This in-text citation indicates that the idea 
presented in this sentence is taken from an outside 
source. The in-text citation gives the surname of the 
author (Reksten) and the year the source was 
published (2000). This citation uses APA style. See 
APA in-text citation. 
Structure: Body paragraphs 
The final sentence of the paragraph summarises and 
restates the idea introduced at the start of the 
paragraph. 
Referencing: 
Paraphrasing 
The idea in this sentence is taken from an outside 
source, as indicated by the in-text citation. The 
exact wording of the source has not been used, so 
this is a paraphrase. See 
paraphrasing and 
summarising.